Snippet

Jul. 27th, 2010 04:06 pm
piplover: (hobbits)
[personal profile] piplover
For [livejournal.com profile] shirebound because she's the only one who took pity on me and gave me an idea. 

          Though the sun beat down upon the square where they all assembled, Pippin did not feel the heat.  Dressed as he was in his finest uniform, he should have found that strange.  However, with a cool spring breeze ruffling his hair and the company of his fellow hobbits, he felt nothing but joy, as though his body had become infused with the enthusiasm of his mind.

                The evil which had dogged their every step and haunted their dreams had finally been vanquished.  All they had suffered, all they had lost,  had led them to this moment, and he could not keep the smile form his face.  There may have been gaps in their Company, but he knew, as every hobbit did, that where there was a hole, there was often something lovely to be found inside.  Such was the case now, as he stood side by side with his Merry, the memories of what had passed filling the holes with something sharp and sweet, like spiced ginger.  It burned, at first, standing there without Boromir's large frame beside him, but even now he could feel the sweet memories filling up the empty places.

               Aragorn, his King, was finally being crowned today. Everything was as it should be. 

Date: 2010-07-28 12:03 am (UTC)
shirebound: (Four hobbits - Mucun/Rei)
From: [personal profile] shirebound
What a lovely scene. I especially like "even now he could feel the sweet memories filling up the empty places." Dear Pippin, nothing can dampen his incredible spirit for long.

Date: 2010-07-28 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Exactly! He may have been sad for a bit, but nothing keeps our Pippin down!

Date: 2010-07-28 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com
Hi, here from [livejournal.com profile] shirebound.

A very lovely snippet.

Date: 2010-07-28 12:18 am (UTC)
shirebound: (Four hobbits - Mucun/Rei)
From: [personal profile] shirebound
Thank you for this sweet snippet.

(You might want to correct the spelling of 'vanguished'.)

Date: 2010-07-28 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Doh! Fixed!

Date: 2010-07-28 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Aww, thanks!

Date: 2010-07-28 01:10 am (UTC)
dreamflower: gandalf at bag end (Default)
From: [personal profile] dreamflower
Oh, sweetie, this is just beautiful! And so like our unquenchable Took!

Here via Shirebound

Date: 2010-07-28 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gamgeefest.livejournal.com
This is a lovely little piece!

but he knew, as every hobbit did, that where there was a hole, there was often something lovely to be found inside

Brilliant - and very wise of our ever-practical hobbits.

Date: 2010-07-28 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Ahh, thanks! Pippin is pretty unstoppable. Just ask the troll he killed!

Re: Here via Shirebound

Date: 2010-07-28 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked!

Date: 2010-07-28 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
This was lovely.

Date: 2010-07-28 07:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-wonderer.livejournal.com
I have missed your writing so much. I'm so glad Shirebound pointed this out on her LJ. I love the line about Boromir's place being filled with sweet memories. Just lovely!

Date: 2010-07-28 11:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lily-the-hobbit.livejournal.com
What a lovely moment!

Date: 2010-07-28 03:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
Here on Shirebound's rec. This is lovely. Pippin's unquenchable spirit surely helped the quest succeed.

Date: 2010-07-28 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2010-07-28 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Ahhh, thanks! I do miss writing the hobbits, but the muse has been very tight lipped for so long, it's like relearning how to walk. Baby steps!

Date: 2010-07-28 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2010-07-28 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yes, I love Pippin so much. Nothing can keep him down for long!

Date: 2010-07-28 05:40 pm (UTC)
ext_16267: (myloveshobbitshobbitshobbits)
From: [identity profile] slipperieslope.livejournal.com
Terrific last line!

Date: 2010-07-28 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2010-07-28 11:25 pm (UTC)
ext_16267: (amoodsmileyslip)
From: [identity profile] slipperieslope.livejournal.com
You are very welcome and as you are such good friends with my dear [livejournal.com profile] enkiduts and sweet [livejournal.com profile] shirebound I am thinking we should be 'friends', too!

Date: 2010-07-29 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Oh, yes, we must! Friended you!

Date: 2010-08-02 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dodger-sister.livejournal.com
Hi, found this through [livejournal.com profile] shirebound

Omg, this - It burned, at first, standing there without Boromir's large frame beside him, but even now he could feel the sweet memories filling up the empty places.

I love Pippin and Boromir's friendship so much. And I love how you can feel all the changes Pip has gone through just from these few passages!

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