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Since my beta is currently occupied with the Ents, I thought I would post this one un-beta'ed. I hope you enjoy.

Gentle Hands


The first thing he became aware of was the feel of gentle hands running through his hair, brushing tenderly the stray locks that had always seemed to have a life of their own away from his forehead. A stray breeze wafted through the tent, teasing his lips like a kiss, and cooling the sweat from his fevered body.

“Now, young hobbit,” a gruff voice whispered softly by his ear, bristly whiskers tickling his nose. “You are nearly presentable again. Truly, though, this short hair of yours is most unmanageable. Why, if you had a beard, I could braid it so masterfully that not even your own cousins would be able to see anything amiss. But,” Gimli sighed, calloused fingers moving to touch Pippin’s beardless cheek gently, “young hobbits do not have facial hair, and, indeed, you would look rather silly with a beard. So I will settle for taking care of your hair, and we shall see if we cannot get some of these tangles out, shall we?”

The hands, roughened and calloused by years of battle and working the forge, gently wound their way through the hobbit’s thick curls, patiently undoing snarls and dampening locks to make them more manageable.

“Now,” Gimli murmured, touching Pippin’s hair once more. “Let us see what kind of a state your feet are in, shall we?”

The sound of a body moving, a chair sliding across thick rug, and then fingers tenderly moving the blankets aside from his feet, taking special care of the broken foot.

“Ah, yes,” Gimli sighed. “This is quite a state, Master Peregrin, and will never do. Let me just get that foot comb of your cousin’s and we shall set you to rights.”

More movement, and then several moments later one of his feet was lifted tenderly and then set down again on a pillow, allowing better access, Pippin guessed. For a moment he cringed at the thought of the dwarf’s rough hands handling his still very sensitive feet, especially his broken one, but as the comb was gently run through his foot hair, he realized that he had nothing to fear.

Gimli worked slowly, patiently, with the attention a jeweler gave to his trade. His hands were delicate and steady, working the teeth of the comb through hair matted and tangled with a gentleness few would have suspected the gruff dwarf possessed.

“Now, I know that you would prefer to have Master Merry here, but he was called away by King Éomer for some duty or other that was rather urgent. He shall be back within a day or so, and let me tell you, Pippin,” Gimli continued, in a conspiratorial whisper, “that if it had not been a direct order from the King, he would still be here by your side. As it is, you shall have to deal with my meager skills.”

Several moments of silence passed after this announcement, and then Pippin’s foot was placed back on the mattress and the other gently moved, taking its place on the pillow. He felt himself wince, broken bones grinding despite the gentle handling.

“I know, Pippin, it’s all right. I’ll wait a moment before I start,” Gimli murmured.

The sound of water splashing, and then a cool cloth run across his face, wiping away the sweat and cooling burning skin. Water dribbled across his dry lips, into his mouth and wetting his tongue. More followed, little trickles that he swallowed easily and moistened his dry throat.

“Now,” Gimli whispered, and Pippin once more felt fingers on his foot. “Let us see about this mess, shall we?”

There was silence again, save for the soft sound of the comb being run through matted hair, and Gimli’s soft breath as he worked.

“Dear lad, I do believe that you are presentable once more. When Aragorn comes to check on you in a bit, he may not recognize this well groomed hobbit before him,” Gimli teased.

Pippin’s foot was moved, placed back to the pillow it usually rested upon while the other pillow was taken away. His feet were covered with the blanket, and the sound of the chair moving again alerted the tweenager that Gimli had moved up near his head.

Strong fingers closed tenderly around his hand, and for all their strength, the grip was as gentle as though closed around a rare and delicate flower.

“Legolas shall be in shortly, but he had to go with Aragorn to tend to some matters that I know little about. Be thankful, young hobbit, that you are not with them, lest they have you running from one side of camp to the other. I suspect that your cousin was not so lucky, and finds himself doing just such a thing. So you had better get well soon, so that you may join him and relieve some of his tedium.”

Pippin tried to respond, but his mind, clouded in the dense fog that seemed to have taken up permanent residence since he had first risen to conciseness, was not allowing his lips to remember how to move, and he found his nose scrunching instead.

“I quite agree,” Gimli answered, as though he had heard the unspoken comment. “But you are just going to have to be patient, and wait until everything settles down before you can throw yourself into the thick of things again.” The gentle clasp squeezed slightly, calluses scraping against his thumb and wrist. “Until then, I suggest that you continue to rest, and not worry. All too soon you shall be running about, driving us to distraction. Let us enjoy our quiet while we may.”

For all Gimli’s gruffness, the hands that closed so securely around Pippin’s were tender, and he knew that few would ever guess that the dwarf possessed such gentle hands.

Date: 2004-10-02 02:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shirebound
Oh, Pip! What a loving, gentle, tender, wonderful story!! I doubt Gimli would say or do any of these things if anyone else were around.

Strong fingers closed tenderly around his hand, and for all their strength, the grip was as gentle as though closed around a rare and delicate flower.


Would you consider a Part II, later on, when Pippin is a bit better, and keeps Gimli's secret, and Gimli realizes it?

*happy sigh*

Date: 2004-10-02 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Oh, I never thought of that! I think that can be arranged!

Date: 2004-10-02 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lil-banik-slave.livejournal.com
*Squeeeeee*

*Tries to think of something more constructive to say*

*Squeeeeeeee*

Date: 2004-10-03 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad I could render you speachless!

Date: 2004-10-03 11:52 pm (UTC)

Date: 2004-10-02 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Oh, wonderful! So few stories do such a nice job with Gimli. Thank you!

Date: 2004-10-03 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad I could bring a little life to a character far too often over-looked, even by myself.

Date: 2004-10-03 01:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ansostuff.livejournal.com
You did post! Good hobbit :)

This was very nice. Gimli can be loving and tender if we give him the chance. And I think he and Pip developed quite a riendship in Ithilien.

Date: 2004-10-03 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
I think so, too. After all, I doubt a gruff, mean old dwarf could have formed such a lasting friendship with an elf unless there was something gentle about him.

Date: 2004-10-03 09:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melilot-hill.livejournal.com
What a lovely, loving moment between Gimli and Pippin! I think it's great to see another side of "the gruff dwarf" for a change :)

Date: 2004-10-03 03:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2004-10-03 12:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariole.livejournal.com
How sweet! I never imagined Gimli brushing hair -- and foot hair at that! So clever. What a lovely scene between these two characters. Thank you!

Date: 2004-10-03 03:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it. I'm not sure where the idea came from, but for some reason, it just seamed a Gimli moment to me.

Date: 2004-10-03 12:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 2cbetter.livejournal.com
Wow, I am teary after reading this but ever since reading a scene in one of Lindelea's stories involving Gimli, some tiny hobbits, and ribbons in his beard - I have been in the camp that sees our dear Master Dwarf as having a rough exterior but on the inside he has a very big soft spot where the hobbits, indeed all his friends, are concerned!

Date: 2004-10-03 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
I agree. I never did picture him as being all mean and gruff. After all, Legolas saw tenderness in him, didn't he?

Date: 2004-10-03 12:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glorfinniel.livejournal.com
Oh.

That's the word to sum this up at the moment in my opinon. It's really quite breathtaking and ever so beautiful. :)

Date: 2004-10-03 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
*blush*
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2004-10-03 12:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com
Good gracious, how wonderful! Would you allow me to translate this into german? This is so delicate, so sweet and tender - I just wish to give my readers over here a chance to enjoy it! (My site is here: http://www.cuthalionsbogen.de)

Thank you for writing and sharing that fine, little tale with us!

Date: 2004-10-03 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Wow! I would be honored! Go right ahead, and thank you for such high priase!

Date: 2004-10-03 01:45 pm (UTC)
slightlytookish: John and Gale looking at each other against a blue background (Default)
From: [personal profile] slightlytookish
This is so beautiful - so very calm and gentle to read. I'm so glad Shirebound pointed out this story - I would not have wanted to miss this! :)

Date: 2004-10-03 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2004-10-03 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elendiari22.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. Who would imagine Gimli being so gentle? That dwarf has a soft spot the size of the Shire in in his heart; this is such a wonderful fic. Thank you!

Date: 2004-10-03 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you! I think our gruff dwarf often gets forgotten, and so I'm glad that people are enjoying this.

Date: 2004-10-03 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gentlehobbit.livejournal.com
Ooh, I loved this. Gimli rarely gets mentioned in fics, other than as a supporting character, and you have fleshed him out wonderfully here. How tender and careful he is! You really painted the image of him as being just as meticulous, cautious and careful as a dwarf would be around the creating of stone and golden things.

Lovely!

Date: 2004-10-03 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you! While I was writing this, I realized that most people picture Gimli as being almost clumsy he's so warrior like. But he is a dwarf, and they must have steady hands and patience to work with the jewels and make the things they do. I was hoping to bring out this side in him, and I'm glad that I was somewhat successful!

Date: 2004-10-03 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aprilkat.livejournal.com
Hi - just popped over via [livejournal.com profile] shirebound. Thanks for such a gentle perceptive story about Gimli. This is the side he would disdain to show others, yet I've always thought that his persistence in finding and saving Pippin (as well as other actions) showed that his bond and affection for the Fellowship were as deeply felt and true as any other member. His gruff exterior belied his nature, and your story was a charming exposure of his secret.

Date: 2004-10-04 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you! Just don't tell Gimli, because he would deny every word of it!

Date: 2004-10-03 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elwenlj.livejournal.com
What a wonderfully tender scene. I can sense the quiet in the tent and Gimli's very gentle touch. And I bet that if asked about it later the dwarf would have told Pip it was all a fever dream.

Date: 2004-10-04 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Lol, exactly! And due to Shirebound's prompting, I am working on a sequal dealing with just such a thing.

Date: 2004-10-03 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coriandra.livejournal.com
That was just lovely! It shows a side of Gimli we don't see very often. Not very many people write about Gimli unless Legolas is with him, so I'm always glad when someone does, and what they come up with is usually interesting. You've certainly written something original here. Great work! I love it.

Date: 2004-10-04 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you! I love to write, and I think the best thing an author can do is write characters that I normally wouldn't explore. Their tales always come out so interesting and true!

Date: 2004-10-03 11:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-wonderer.livejournal.com
This was beautiful! I love the way that you are able to show Gimli's gentle side and his care for Pippin. I found this through a post of Shirebound's and I am very glad that I did. This is just lovely.

Date: 2004-10-04 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2004-10-04 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myladylyssa.livejournal.com
I love your Gimli. This scene is so tender and has a quiet healing quality. Thanks for the image!

Date: 2004-10-04 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piplover.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2004-11-19 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] voontah.livejournal.com
Shirebound recommended this story to me. This was beautiful. You've exposed me to a side of Gimli that I hadn't really considered before.

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