All Things Sad Become Untrue

Ok, I'm writing a Torchwood fic which lil_banik_slave has been beta-ing for me.   Than you so much, sweetie! But I'm stuck!  I know where I want the story to go, but, really, the words are not coming!   I've rewritten the same scene like five times and each time I end up deleting it.  What do you all do when you end up stuck like this?  I've tried writing different scenes, but apparently my brain only works in a linear fashion and I keep getting sucked back into that difficult scene. 

Help?

I started writing Torchwood sometime last week, after becoming obsessed with the series.  Although I'm currently writing a larger story, this bunny came out of the dark and bit me hard.  I haven't seen episode 2x09, so if there are any wrongdoings, please let me know.  I wrote this based off spoilers and reactions from my flist.  Also, it's a style I don't normally write.  Let me know if it works and if it's worth posting somewhere else? 

Oh, and isn't my icon cool?  I got it from bm_shipper



Title:  Those Who Serve
Author:  Piplover
Rating: Gen
Pairing:  Jack/Ianto
Warning:  Spoiler for ep 2x09
Author's Notes:  Not beta'ed

I have become hopelessly addicted to Torchwood. Can anyone on my flist recommend some good Jack/Ianto fics that won't make me want to bleach my brain? I've found a few, but for the most part the fics I've found consist of wibbling lips, crying, and so much OOC-ness it's like I'm not even reading TW fic.

Any help would be appreciated! Thanks!